PriscaMitica

This is so good! It looks like you travelled to the future and copied the script of a Freeman's Mind episode. It has Ross's writing all over it! The only part that isn't very Ross-like is that Alyx is a genetic engineered super soldier, but to be honest, you have to jump through a lot of hoops to explain why Alyx can take so much bullets without so much as flinching. Maybe he will just not show Alyx getting shot? Who knows. Amazing work none the less!