Collective Foal

That cloaked bugger creeps me the fuck out

pQiXPHhZ4Go Two of them in there. "What knockers!" and "Blucher!" *Neigh!*

Banned for having the potential to own Skyrim. I don't have a means of purchasing or playing that game but I WANT IT NAAAAOOOOW!

Suspicious but ever-tempted by the thought of wealth and fame, Dominicus proceeds to his rented docking bay, where his squad of 3 Shadow Beams idle. He tells his squadmates to follow him and takes off, pulling a few aerial maneuvers to warm himself up. He then proceeds to fall in formation at cruising speed in front of the massive ship belonging to the Professor. "Now listen, Argyle," He says, trying to reach the professor through his communications system, "I want to know what's out there before some serious shit happens to me and my crew. I'll risk my life, but I will NOT sign a death warrant for your little treasure hunting cause! So somebody tell me what the fuck is on the other side of the galactic core or you're losing the best damn pilots the US Air Force ET branch has to offer!"

So far so good. Someone already favorited me, I have 147 hits and 51 views. For the first 24 hours, that feels awesome. It probably isn't a lot, but I'm new to posting things of mine on the interwebz (I've never posted to Youtube before or ANYTHING) so don't crush my dreams.

Is it Russian?

It's a bomb. Far to small to be an MOAB. Probably dropped from a B-2, I would think? Looks too large to be a conventional carpet bomb that a B-52 would carry.

Professor, believe me when I say my squad and I are by far some of the best the galaxy. You will be able to execute this mission with the greatest of ease with our support. I have heard this myth before and I trust your intelligence enough to believe it could definitely be on the "Golden Planet," but I would like to know what we'll be facing. Now mind you, I don't scare easily. But I do know what a suicide mission is. What kind of enemies are over there?

You didn't get trolled,

Chapter 3 is up. Thanks for the positive comments. @Rarity, I noticed that too, but the point of the first two chapters was to introduce characters, setting and crap and get it out of the way as fast as possible. I was really looking forward to Chapter 3 at the time and you'll notice, it's VERY descriptive. The last 3 chapters are decent in length compared to the first 2. My plan is to make this a series of stories, as you will soon see when I put up the last chapter. I just REALLY hope it gets noticed and I get some reviews on it.

In better news, if anyone wants to read, I've got the first two chapters of my fanfic up on FanFiction.net Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7537678/1/Flash_Rebirth

No. The text message specifically said Lauren quit. That means this whole thing is going to SHIT! That's what upsets me! If she stayed, they would have been able to keep quality AT LEAST until Season 5. Now we probably don't even get a full Season 3 and it becomes one of those shows where the fanbase doesn't know what to do, dies out, and is quickly forgotten.

-Private Joker, why did you join my beloved corps?! -Sir, to kill, sir! -So you're a killer? Let me see your war face! -Sir? -You're war face, private. AAAAHHH!!! That's a war face! Show me your war face! -AAAAAAHHHHH! -Bullshit, you didn't convince me! Show me a real war face! -AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! -You don't scare me, work on it!

NO NO NO! Why did she leave?! Why is it every time I get super involved in something, it begins to die?! Why do I throw myself into things like this so I get so damn devastated when they die out?!

A really small Catterpillar?

Dominicus strolls in through the tavern door and sees the rather small party. "Is this the expedition crew? Tell me there's more."

I've already thought about it and I know if I got my Cutie Mark, it would be a bright, yellow lightning bolt. Symbolizing my speed and flying abilities, as well as my sense of justice and ferocity towards those who do bad to others.

Yes, that's usually the problem. I doubt our sister fanbase of 5 year old girls minds the new episodes like we do.

Since it's apparently relaxing to them, it's a win-win situation!

The climactic piece of course. A climax is meant to give the listener a feeling of strong emotion, whether it be of happiness, anger, sadness, triumph, etc. Anticlimactic, constant, droning music has no texture and only works as movie background music. That first piano piece might have worked as a background piece for a dramatic sequence, but a major improvement to that would be a huge brass blast to emphasize, kind of like Hans Zimmerman's piece in inception. It's a little repetitive, but that's the point. To conclude, non-climax is okay, but it should at least have power behind it to begin with.

I just like how they practically paralyze when you hold them upside down by their feet.

It doesn't quite have that same innocent feel, I think, but I still like about as much as I like S1. (Jek Jek, Spoiler tags por favor) Add: So I tried to read something gory again, feeling like I could manage this time. I got 5 sentences into "Rocket to Insanity" and started squirming. The thing is, I know in my mind that I could watch somebody die. If I were in a war, I could sink that knife in the back of someone's neck. But when I read, I put myself in the characters' shoes, and I cannot seperate myself. So I feel my own stomach being slit open and myself being tortured brutally. Maybe I should try an audial reading. That might work better.

I love the smell of Napalm in the morning