Collective Foal

I heard douche, stuff something up his ass, and twat...

Yea, It looks nice, and her expression helps it, but it's kind of like a different pony entirely. She's supposed to be soft, pastel colors, not scene.

I used dual hair colors in mine because it was easier to get his base color scheme. Yellow hair alon doesn't look that good...

As I am intelligent, and knew which colors would get the desired effect for my character, I did not make this mistake.

(piggybacking here) and the stealth of 300 Spartans.

Hey, remember when GLaDOS was a psychopathic bitch hellbent on killing you?

6/10 the old one was better. And i did not get MW3, it turns out. My mom didn't want to wait in the long ass line at Gamestop, and I did some thinking and Id rather have BF3. I feel I owe it to you to do something in return for your 24 game gift to me <3

Banned for banning The Doctor.

Koach, how impractical can you be? And JC its airsoft. Also, like the new avi. Its a good FM reference.

So I was playing Demolition on Black Ops today and said "You know what? Fuck it." I went duel wield pythons the whole round, 360 ROFLsauce scoping with trololol and rage faic on the side, and came out on top of the team with 36 Kills, 12 Deaths. I might be adapting an Akimbow whore attitude soon. As long as the person is close, line them up center screen and mash triggers. Guarenteed kill, especially with Steady Aim Pro.

Not sleeping. I finally turned off the xbox though.

I think mine would be either a lightning bolt, a fireball, or a pairmof angel's wings, depending on how I turn out as an adult. Oh, I see what we're doing here with titles. vnbhc6m_yPk

I prefer Ubersaw, as it helps the push. Medevil Medic is better for defense. So I would be rapisly pressing the M1 on everybody I saw, keeping them alive, then removing the flames.

My favorites list is ever changing, but here's what I've got now: 1. Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie 2. Applejack 3. Rainbow Dash 4. Rarity 5. Twilight Sparkle Pinkie just reminds me of how I used to be vs. Me now being more Fluttershy. I used to be so carefree, outgoing, and happy. Now i'm very kept to myself and I'm depressed almost constantly. Oh, and if you guys ever feel like I bitch too much about my own life, please let me know. I don't want to ruin anyone's day talking about that kind of thing.

So true... Dem' F2P pubbers never stand a chance!

*Facepalm You obviously didn't get my reference to yesterday's conversation about zebras.

I don't want to drive away girls with my bronyness (I've never even kissed a girl, as it were) so I want to stick with subtle shirts that only fellow bronies will get. But I REALLY want one that says "Tough guys wear Pinkie Pie"

No, it's in the basement and I'm still lost somewhere outside of Cairo.

How dare you not admit they are ridiculously adorable?!

Banned because defenestrate is a much more exciting word than contact or yell.

12/10 Matching name makes it 20% cooler!

Holy shit, I think I left my Xbox on!

For the fic, you constantly switch back and forth between past and present tense. Don't do that. It's bad. Your dialogue is decent, but frankly, that's all it is. Be more descriptive. You have to use sensory details to absorb the reader into the environment. Just saying "He said this. She said that." is only half of the story. And, pertaining to what Blue said, using details makes the piece longer and allows you to suck the reader in. A short fic will entertain the reader for a short time, while a long, detailed fic will absorb the reader and make them wonder what comes next. I grabbed this link to give you an example of a really well written fic (no, its not mine. I'm not that full of myself.) Use it to help you along with your own writing style.

How dare you cause my mind to explode?!

Hey, remember when GIR was the Pinkie Pie of television?