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hmm, as always i love offering good feedback. you should separate sections into paragraphs, it's polite to the reader.

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"Those are some very interesting eyes you have there." Yilne glanced at Garret. He gave a wry smile and said "Thank you, Captain. You know, it's been some time since i last had the pleasure of dispatching an enemy." Yilne then looked at Garret and started imagining the last time he had almost died in battle, then his eyes began to glow white. "But, I do agree...they are pretty cool." He said showing off a bit. then he refocused and his eyes went back to the normal deep blue.

"you heard him, Helmsman. Dock with the Valiant." The Helmsman turned the forward thrusters down and prepared the side oriented ones. then he entered a docking code into the ship's auto pilot program. The Helmsman's screen then switched to an image of the Valiant's docking station- via a camera above the Xielumbus' own docking station. He selected the image of the docking platform, and steered in a very calculated manner towards the vessel. Once Yilne's ship got close enough He pressed a switch that connected a thick robotic arm to a receptacle above the platform that pulled the two ships together, as well as anchoring them. "Docking procedure complete, Captain Yilne." the Helmsman reported. "Thank you Kreylip, Very good. MIPAI, shut down the ship and open the docking bay doors. i'll be back momentarily. Keep the weapons on stand-by, i'm not leaving anything to chance." Yilne walked through the Xielumbus collecting his coat. he eventually made it to the docking door, and he made his way through the Valiant- taking stock of just how nice the ship was, it somehow debunked Yilne's lingering suspicion that Argyle wasn't going to pay him. he eventually reached it's briefing room where he noticed Argyle. He walked over to the table, leaned over, put his hands on it, and he switched to English keeping a calm, respectful, and even tone. "Professor, first of which is: who were they? Secondly, i could tell you were hiding something when we met in the bar, just what is going on here?" He said slowly and calmly. "this seems like more than just an escort mission." Yilne noticed no one else was present. "But, i suppose that could wait until the others arrive." Yilne offered as he took his seat at the table, crossing his arms, looking around the room, and keeping an eye on the door.

Teaching myself Italian.

Good idea: hunting with tranquilizer darts. ^^

wow, i completely forgot about Crazy Frog. S_IAqwrvEuU <3 nostalgia.

Bill's untrue advice volume 3! if you want to get away from a tiger- just run into a lake or a body of water. tigers hate water just as much as other felines do...not to mention they cannot swim.

Banned because i hate typos.

Banned or narcissism.

you're as easy to understand as a Tool music video.

Banned for assuming that's what i could totally, possibly, conceivably, could've meant, maybe.

why won't people text me?!

Banned because i'm an admitted post whore, deal with it.

k, Rarity. you might wanna take these lessons first. Mi5zd60ites

Full Metal Jacket reference. i called it out. do i win?

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7/10 it definitely does suit you.

waiting for my food to get ready, maybe watch T.V in a minute.

reminds me of my uncle...

Banned because that was correct Italian, i checked with J.C.

"Neither of us has hit that Vessel, your ship- i doubt it can take on a Corvette by itself. pack it in Therabas. besides, i'm sure it hit it's stealth node a while ago." Yilne switched off the the channel. He starts speaking in the intercom. "Belay the combat Alert. Bring the Xielumbus flight back into formation." The Sergeant flips off a few switches- deactivating the weapons, then he switches off the Targeting Buffer, and finally removes the visor rig. MIPAI orders Yilne's wingmen back into their formation around Yilne's ship. The other ships go on weapons safe and obey the order. Yilne sat back in his captain's chair surveying the wreckage they had caused. "MIPAI, i want these events as of late entered into my log." MIPAI chirped and entered the the challenge from the Janzar, combat kills, the formations ordered, and reported that no damage has been taken by the Janzar or it's supporting ships. "Great kills men." Yilne said speaking to the other Captains. "However, i'm forced to point out that this was just the easy part." He switched off the comm between the other Captains. "Helmsman, i want a generous distance from the Valiant. Sergeant, stay ready, i want you battle ready at a moments notice." "as you command, Yilne." The Helmsman and the Sergeant said in unison as the Helmsman brought the Xielumbus to a fair distance parallel to the Valiant. The Sergeant just sat in his chair keeping the targeting buffer looking for possible hostile targets- in case one suddenly comes into range.

Bannato per non capire quello che sto dicendo. Banned for not understanding what I'm saying.

"haha! with pleasure!" Yilne stood up from his chair and started barking orders over the intercom system. "Put this ship on combat alert status: Beta! Helmsman, keep us straight. guide us towards the Janzar." Yilne's crew scrambled to their post. on The Xielumbus the weapons systems sprang to life -port holes opening, and turrets rising to life, finding their targets. meanwhile the Helmsmen maneuvers the vessel closer to the Janzar. "Gunnery Sergeant, activate the Targeting Buffer, fire the Heavy Cannon! launch missiles at anything that gets close to the Valiant! I want the Laser Cannon on that main ship!" the sergeant pulls down the visor rig and flips a few switches. in his field of vision he was getting a real-time image of the Janzar. he pressed a switch and a grid appears over the main enemy ship. the targeting Buffer takes over- selecting the entire area of the ship, pressing a button he assigns the Heavy Cannon, and the Laser Cannon. the Sergeant presses a button and the Buffer selects the enemy's supporting ships as well- assigning the missiles to the supporting vessels. He flipped up 3 more switches- switching on the Laser Cannon, the Heavy Cannon, and the Missiles. he presses a button on top of the Laser cannon switch and the one above the Heavy Cannon switch, arming the weapons, and begins firing at the Janzar. finally, he presses another button above the missiles- firing them at supporting ships when they get in range of the Valiant. "MIPAI! scramble my wingmen! I want 1 ship covering the Valiant, the other two on the Janzar! Weapons used at their discretion!" MIPAI sends out the scramble order. Wingman 1 heads over to the Valiant- arming it's weapons and firing at any ship that comes near. MIPAI orders the other two on the Janzar. they begin firing a combination of Flak, and Laser Cannon fire.

oh, i realized how that must've sounded. any xbox live, Microsoft points, etc i purchase through cards. i don't keep credit cards on the xbox, or any real personal information. i'm not saying i'm better than anyone if that's what i implied.