My Little Pony:FiM

[Blightmare]

Canon wise? idk. Fanon wise, probably.

[Blue]

The only episode that might be able to offer contrary evidence would be the episode Dragonshy where he picks up a pack that visibly makes him strain, but Applejack carries it fine. However, horses are not strongest in their necks, they're strongest in their legs.

What other ponies might contend Big Macintosh for such a title? I can't think of any other comparably sized ponies that have had as strong of a trimary-or-higher character that aren't Celestia or Luna (presumably, since they are physically much larger).

[Srake]

There's them Railroad Ponies. But they're lower than background ponies.

[Pinkie Pie]

So far so good. Someone already favorited me, I have 147 hits and 51 views.

 

For the first 24 hours, that feels awesome. It probably isn't a lot, but I'm new to posting things of mine on the interwebz (I've never posted to Youtube before or ANYTHING) so don't crush my dreams.

 

I've made like 30 videos on Youtube, but making a fiction? You could never get me to make a fan fiction, it'd either be too long and too descriptive with basically my soul being put into it, or too small because I'm worried what people will think. You picked the hard one. XD

[Blue]

Bah humbug. Big Mac coulda pull that train all by himself easy. Just not all that fast- as far as I've seen, he exemplifies "Slow and Steady".

[Collective Foal]

Dammit Chapter 4! Why can't you type yourself? My hands hurt, I'm tired, and this music is getting fucking annoying. I need silence. BUT I MUST PERSERVERE! CHAPTER 4 MUST GO UP TONIGHT!!!

[Srake]

You're a lot better at this than I am(actually writing it, that is)... I can't bring myself to finish the first chapter of mine. I'm actually thinking about scraping and recycling it. Here's the link to the prologue: http://srake.deviantart.com/#/d49aas1

I would like some feedback. Maybe that would motivate me to actually working on it

[Collective Foal]

Sure thing. I actually had about a month where I had absolutely zero inspiration and this just sat in the middle of Chapter 4, completely stagnant, so I'm just glad I stuck with this, and I would encourage you to do the same

 

Oh, BTW, Chapter 4 is FUCKING FINISHED, FINALLY!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7537678/4/Flash_Rebirth

[Srake]

Hospitality for the win!

[Collective Foal]

 

Oh, and I read your prologue. ME GUSTA MUCHO, SRAKE! I would like to say you should definitely keep this creepy suicidal story going strong. I support you all the way!

 

About your style, you should think about varying your sentence length a little more. Use periodic sentences more (look it up). You use consistently short sentences and it gives it a choppy feel (Though who am i to talk. My sentences are always so damn long, they either get confusing to the reader or they're just ridiculously long-winded.)

 

P.P.S.

Another great chapter. I'm really liking this story so far, flash is a really cool OC

 

SUCK IT SRAKE!

[Koach]

i also did some fics. as usual with my personality, it includes muskets and redcoats. i discussed the idea with a couple of buddies to get some feedback on what should i write. i came up with the idea of making it a straight romantic-ish pg-16 fic. what i love bout it is that when shit gets too hot, i throw a bucket of freezing water at it. it hints a lot that something happened, but the doubt remains. it ended up being hilarious, but has that redcoat feeling and the smell of black powder all over. that pic i posted before was part of chapter 2.

[alphabetagamma]

To be honest, this is my opinion on all fanfics.

 

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[Axeldeath]

^ This.

[Collective Foal]

ABG, were you born to be a party pooper?

 

But seriously, why do you feel that way about them?

[Axeldeath]

Because they don't follow the format of the show. Also grimdark and shipping, that stuff's just weird.

[Pinkie Pie]

I like thinking of fanfics as set in a parallel universe, where some alternate universes are almost exactly like another but with a few changes, to over the top differences like say, if the Reapers were to invade Ponyville. I don't particularily like seeing Pinkie Pie gutting Rainbow Dash with a knife, or seeing Twilight Sparkle have wierd spider sex with a Big Mac spider, but I try to think of it as something completely different, not even really MLP. That being said, that doesn't mean I don't enjoy fanfics, I just don't let the creepy and dark ones bother me.

[Collective Foal]

 

LOOK AT ME!!!

[Pinkie Pie]

I'm naming him Lightning Bolt before you do. :3

[Collective Foal]

NO!!! His name is Flash. You should read more.

[ProHypster]

The colours of the flag of ukraine. I love this pony already.