My Little Pony:FiM

[Mr. ShinyObject]

Gentlemen, this calls for a drink!

 

 

 

But yes, you should all read it and show it to your friends. We will become the awesomest story ever.

[Chuckthe2nd]

[Collective Foal]

 

I died when I saw this. (+rep)

 

Nice job making the fic. I'll add it to my never-ending "read later" list.

 

And going back to ShinyObject, we can't post ponies in the Random Thread anymore? When did this happen?

[Martin]

Here it is

 

 

War never changes, eh?

 

This is a great story and I have a feeling that there are a lot of revelations waiting to be.. revealed. Of course there are a few missing apostrophes and stuff like that but I'm probably the only one who cares about such trivial things. It doesn't feel like it moves too fast nor too slow and there's also somewhat detailed writing so that, too, is nice.

[Mr. ShinyObject]

And going back to ShinyObject, we can't post ponies in the Random Thread anymore? When did this happen?

Better safe than sorry. I try and avoid causing RAEG when possible.

 

But speaking of randomness and ponies.

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This is a great story and I have a feeling that there are a lot of revelations waiting to be.. revealed. Of course there are a few missing apostrophes and stuff like that but I'm probably the only one who cares about such trivial things. It doesn't feel like it moves too fast nor too slow and there's also somewhat detailed writing so that, too, is nice.

Thank you! And you are correct about the revelations, though the first few chapters wil be more about world building than story building. But odn't worry, we won't keep you on the edge too long. And I also think that-

 

Wait.

Of course there are a few missing apostrophes and stuff like that

Blame the editor.

 

 

[Doctor Felix Whooves]

You can thank me for the world building.

 

After all only a mad man can come up with this stuff, but you shiny, you give it life, you give it sole, you give it character! And for that I thank you.

[Mr. ShinyObject]

I <3 U 2 Doc.

 

 

For those unaware of the extremely small brony shoutout on the Cleveland show a while back:

 

 

 

[Srake]

For those unaware of the extremely small brony shoutout on the Cleveland show a while back:

 

 

Even if it is highly unlikely to be a coincidence, that seems like reaching.

[Chuckthe2nd]

Maybe I'll do a dramatic reading of you two's fic once my new microphone comes in the mail.

[Mr. ShinyObject]

For those unaware of the extremely small brony shoutout on the Cleveland show a while back:

 

 

Even if it is highly unlikely to be a coincidence, that seems like reaching.

 

Before the episode aired one of the writers said there would be a reference, but that it would be so small no one would likely notice.

 

EDIT:

Maybe I'll do a dramatic reading of you two's fic once my new microphone comes in the mail.

If you want to, sure, I have no objections.

 

 

[Collective Foal]

Wrote the lyrics for a male version of This Day Aria (basically if Shining Armor sang it)

 

This day is going to be perfect,

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small,

Ponies will see me in my suit,

Think me anything but a brute,

But they don't know that I have fooled them all...

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

This day was going to be perfect,

The kind of day of which I've dreamed since I was small,

But instead of cake and wine,

I'm eating dirt and drinking brine,

If we don't stop him Equestria shall fall,

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

Any memories they've shared,

Ask me later if I care,

Vows? Well I'll be lying when I say,

That through times both bad and good,

I'll be there for her as I should,

In fact I'll kill her once I rule these halls,

 

No, I do not love my bride,

I only feel hate inside,

Still I want for her to be all mine,

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

We must escape this ghastly cavern,

Find a way to save my love,

Oh, I'd be lying if I say,

That I'd willingly forsake her,

For a colt who wants to take her,

Use her and then throw her life away,

 

Oh how do I love my wife,

Without her, I'd want no life,

Oh, my dear Cadence,

I'll be there fast as light,

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

Finally, my moment has arrived,

For me to marry my bewitched bride,

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

But it's just too far to fly,

We'll never make it there in time,

My dear Cadance will be-

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

MINE! All mine!

[Doctor Felix Whooves]

Dam! That's good!

[Chuckthe2nd]

That's really well done, but I can't help but point out this particular song:

 

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EDIT:

 

Apparently, Bronycon the Documentary is officially the second most funded film project of all time on Kickstarter. It even beat out Freddie Wong's VGHS.

[Collective Foal]

His singing leaves a little to be desired. He has a good voice, but he's rather pitchy. And his lyrics aren't as original as mine. I left some alone to make it obviously the same song, but changed almost all the other lines. So... mine is still original enough, and I shall sing it and all the YouTube children shall love me and we shall dance merrily around the maypole that is my Internet fame for the rest of eternity.

 

ALL SHALL LOVE ME AND DESPAIR!

[Doctor Felix Whooves]

His singing leaves a little to be desired. He has a good voice, but he's rather pitchy. And his lyrics aren't as original as mine. I left some alone to make it obviously the same song, but changed almost all the other lines. So... mine is still original enough, and I shall sing it and all the YouTube children shall love me and we shall dance merrily around the maypole that is my Internet fame for the rest of eternity.

 

ALL SHALL LOVE ME AND DESPAIR!

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[Srake]

Gotta represent for AllLevels, my favorite YTArtist

http://soundcloud.com/alllevelsatonce/this-day-aria-straight-vocal

[Kirkreng]

[Srake]

Gross, /block element.

[Pinkie Pie]

[Mr. ShinyObject]

The password is "fluttershy". A well done brony doc, pretty objective.