More suggestions:
- Typo: subtitle 7—'been in a bike' vs 'on'
- In-game dialogue that's already subtitled doesn't need to be subtitled again (e.g. ["Hey look! It's Sonic!!"], ["Shaa!"], etc.) but unsubtitled stuff like ["Take that! Take that! Take that!"] can stay in.
Alright, that's it. If I notice anything else, I'll add it to this.
Edit: Forget first typo, I'm dumb.